![]() ![]() ![]() I thought it might be the translator breaking up the chapters, but its not even parts of a single chapter.ģ) Character gave up his personality way too soon. Too little to do anything of real significance. 8 at this point) is between 300 and 800 words. If that was going to be the case then why start the story at such a young age? Or why not just have all the time skips in one go? What is the point of checking up on the progress of the character if there is ZERO world building, ZERO character building, and the importance of the chapter can be summed up in a character sheet of before and after?Ģ) WORD COUNT! Each chapter (up to ch. The only thing the author described about the characters is that s*ave merchant has a beard, Versam von Elsa is 60 years old, and Falco, who will be the MC's teacher for years, is a "white-haired man."Īt best, this novel can be a filler for your time, but I would not recommend reading this novel for good story-telling.ġ) Time Skips nearly every chapter. The author doesn't explain the world surrounding MC and only gives a brief description about the mansion he's going to live for years later. This author should read the first few chapters of Overlord to understand how a character should react in an abnormal situation to make it more realistic. After he was transported, he was like, "I now know I'm a s*ave, so I'm just gonna accept whatever will happen to me, and the possibility of being transported and become a 6 years old s*ave being a dream and not reality is practically 0%." This is not realistic for someone who has been living a normal life, having ordinary job, and never been a s*ave nor treated badly reacts in this kind of situation. After that, he never even thinks about escaping. ![]() Only after being bought, he once tried to escape but got electric shocked. Also, from the description, he didn't even seem to be confused or desperately try to escape. After transported to another world, the MC has no sense of urgency of finding out where he is, why he was transported, and what this world is. ![]()
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